Too long?

[deerhuntr4885]

LAST EDITED ON Jan-06-06 AT 02:39AM (MST)[p]Before I start the rest of the story for my WT is it too long for you guys? Want me to condense it down? I'm talking about the Alberta story if you didn't figure it out.

Mike

 

[NvrEnuf]

Some may say that it was too long right after they are completely finished reading it. I think the way you wrote the first story was just right. Only one problem you might have with the 2nd half of the story is now the muleys already dead and you're hunting an inferior species. Next time you should get everyone thirsty with the white tail story and then unleash the muley story on em!

That's enought of my BS. Lets hear your story man.

NvrEnuf

 

[Lien2]

Sh!t or get off the pot.
Nice deer though.

Lien2